Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Views about how to deal with an unfavourable circumstance, such as a financial setback, a health problem or workplace difficulty, vary according to people's opinions. Though accepting predicaments can be a reasonable attitude towards them, taking a positive approach to change the situation is a better option from my perspective.
Those believing coming to terms with an unsatisfactory situation is the best are understandable for several reasons. The foremost ground to support this view is the essence of life, which is all about challenges. Never can anyone claim, with confidence, that life is a bed of roses since there will be inevitable tough times and unfortunate events in particular periods. Therefore, people may not need to react dramatically to them and can accept things as they are and move on with other workable life problems instead. Another approving reason for acceptance of difficult situations is that changes are counterproductive in some circumstances. When faced with a difficult situation, most people may seek a solution to improve or eliminate it. However, finding it is not always comfortable and may require massive efforts and even risk-taking. In that case, acceptance, by contrast, seems to be an optimal approach since it can allow people to admit their endurance limit, let them have mindful peace to ease distressing emotions and offer them a sense of security.
Nevertheless, I assume that striving to improve unsatisfactory circumstances is a more optimal attitude towards them. Cited to support this idea, difficulties in life are not barriers to our steps on the path of life but opportunities for self-growth. When such stressful problems arise, mentally well-based people can acknowledge that they need to make decisions to face reality and strive for better performance, which is an effective way of self-motivation and ability discovery. Furthermore, although acceptance is a way to cope with difficult times for the reasons mentioned above, some misunderstand it as giving up and stopping trying to improve the situation. Accepting an unfavourable circumstance had better be a phase for mind rest when we can take a step back and consider the problem thoroughly to prepare for a breakthrough solution, as living a life full of breakthroughs is a true definition of living to the fullest.
In conclusion, though it is understandable to accept unsatisfactory situations, people should try their best to strive for change as a positive approach to dealing with such issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...workplace difficulty, vary according to peoples opinions. Though accepting predicaments...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32914572864 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2860834954 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562814070352 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8485782163 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5625 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213255831827 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721058280768 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537160948966 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145120084965 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152659295801 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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