Some people believe that it is best accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Either embracing extreme situations like discontented jobs or striving for a better one is a dilemma to many people. While some argue that acceptance is considered the optimum approach, others believe that looking for solutions to make unpleasant circumstances better. Personally, I am totally inclined towards the latter perception.
To advocates, encountering difficulties is inevitable in life and accepting them fosters constructive emotions in people. Psychologically, this creates a sense of security as nothing can be changed and things will automatically getting better themselves which certainly raise their level of happiness. To illustrate this, students who are not eligible for being admitted into prestigious universities due to their examination results will have no other option but to proceed their education in normal ones. However, most of them still graduate, attain their Bachelor and satisfactory jobs just like their peers from better institutions.
Although to certain people, taking endeavors to improve unfavorable circumstances, ironically, exacerbates them and apparently results in stress and disappointment, it is commonly argued by a majority of people to provide a more successful life compared to just sitting there anticipating a miracle to happen. The primary reason, indeed, is claimed by many people that striving for a better situation potentially leads people to achieving many unprecedented goals. This provides great success and eventually opens the door to a desirable life. For instance, the widely known and favoured actor Rowan Aktinson who was in the past consistently rejected by many film companies due to his stammering problem. Instead of giving up, he decided to fight back his difficulty by making the show of his own, Mr Bean, which is now one of the most popular series to many people.
In conclusion, despite how safe it is to embrace difficult situations, finding methods to overcome them is mostly believed to get people to the door of success and contented life. Thus, to me, if a person desires for a better life, he should try to fight back the obstacles along the way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, if, look, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41265060241 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05370441983 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644578313253 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9506783818 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.3125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132366469826 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407438390692 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450272839966 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869858843564 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474142086676 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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