Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Is the unfavorable situation one is acquainted with more comfortable than the environment of totally new circumstances? There exists an opinion stating that being in a difficult situation with a lack of funds, a frustrating job, and irritating relationships is better than trying to change this position, pursuing the dream for a better life. At the same time, some people assume that it is of great importance to challenge yourself. Since a try to transform one's reality into something beautiful could end up creating a whole lot of precious opportunities for the future.
Personally, I am in two minds about this issue, since the proposed way forward could vary depending on some details. For example, in Russia, there are countless marriages in which partners live in unhealthy relations with arguments and total disagreement. These practices jeopardize any moral value for the prosperity of partners as separate individuals. Moreover, children in such marriages are at great risk of having different psychological traumas that could arise at any point in their future lives. This instance is definitely the case when one should get all the powers to end up relationships and find a way to improve the situation, even it is hard and painful.
On the other hand, sometimes people who have an unsatisfactory job quickly try to change it and find another one, limiting themselves from the opportunity to open up some new doors. They just do not understand that these possibilities to climb the career ladder and feel pure enjoyment can only appear after a period of tough, round-the-clock work. What is more, the money shortage is usual for almost all the professionals at the initial stages of development. And no matter whether you are an intern at an investment bank in London or work as the level one staff in Deloitte, you have all the grounds not to be satisfied with the current conditions. However, this situation should only motivate you to work even harder and take more responsibilities, since it will definitely change and provide you with skills and a deep understanding of the work you perform.
Summarising the aforementioned examples, a bad situation for a limited time period could be motivating and positive at one point, and one does not have to give up right after being unsatisfied at first. Nevertheless, some cases, that evoke the conditions when a person is stressed out completely and is under permanent pressure, should be changed. And I believe that it is better to try than regret the missed opportunity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2119.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05727923628 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04437703888 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570405727924 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2433221929 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.647058824 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6470588235 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196034644626 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560551487335 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520032528226 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110537374652 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431743861214 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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