Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Is the unfavorable situation one is acquainted with more comfortable than the environment of totally new circumstances? There exists an opinion stating that being in a difficult situation with lack of funds, frustrating job, and irritating relationships is better than trying to change this position, persuing the dream for the better life. At the same time, some people assume that it is of great importance to challenge yourself and try to transform your reality into the something beautiful, creating a whole lot of precious opportunities for thr future.
Personally, I am in two minds about this issue, since the proposed way forward could vary depending on some details. For example, in Russia there are countless marriages in which parters live in unhealthy relations with arguments and total disagreement jeopardizing any moral value for prosperity of them as separate individuals. Moreover, children in such marriages are at great risk of having different psychological traumas that could ariseat any point of their futer lives. This instance is definitely the case when one should get all the powers to end up relationships and find the way to improve the situation, even it is hard and painful.
On the other hand, sometimes people who have an unsatisfactory job quickly try to change it and find another one, limiting themselves from the opportunity to open up some new doors. They just do not sometimes understand that these possibilities to climb the career ledder and feel pure enjoyment can only appear after the period of tough, round-the-clock work. What is more, money shortage and the situations when people have to set aside some money to buy something are usuall for almost all the professions. And no matter whether you are an intern an investment bank in London or work as the level one staff in Deloitte, you have all the grounds not to be satisfied with the current conditions. However, this situation should only motivate you to work even harder and take more responsibilities, since it will definitely change.
Summarising the aforementioned examples, I can conclude that being in a bad situation for a limited time period could be motivating and positive at one point, and one does not have to give up right after being unsatisfied at first. Nevertheless, some cases, that ewoke the conditions when person is stressed out completely and is under the permanet pressure, should be changed. And I believe that it is better to try then regret the missed opportunity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 507, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...nto the something beautiful, creating a whole lot of precious opportunities for thr futur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, for example, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10268948655 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98536511597 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58435207824 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1244194808 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.133333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236886118008 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713005061751 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612272968875 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126313478731 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567468103625 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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