Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Opinions vary with regard to the question whether it is worth to struggle with poor life conditions and unsatisfactory employment or not. For some people it is obvious that we should put up with what we have already possessed as situation could be worse several times. Simultaneously, people have opposite opinion that we are builders of our own life passage and there is nothing impossible: better life requires harder efforts. I strongly stick to the second point of view.
On the one hand, in some occasions people face to hopeless circumstances that put them in to the frames. For instance, students with low financial family backgrounds are forced to find part-time jobs to find any ways to earn a living. So, they are unable to opt for high-paid salaries and convenient working conditions, they just accept their position and agree with all that employers offer them. Next age group that I would like to mention is elderly people. Due to the current economic situation people under 50s years old are out of competition on the workforce market. On account of the fact, it is immensely difficult for them to be employed on satisfactory conditions, they have to cope with shortage of money and struggle to survive. I regard the causes of this dramatic situation to the government poor social policy and low social payments for old people.
On the other hand, only hardworking, goal setting and incredibly diligent individuals reach the severe success in their careers. You need to devote the great deal of time to overpower hindrances on your way, besides this you should be ready to have plethora of failures but on the final, you would definitely reach the top. Uncertainty could become the major problem, so be confident, you are the best person who can refresh your life pass and improve your living conditions. One of the multitude examples of celebrities, who was born in financially backward family, challenged himself and overcome all difficulties is world-famous actor Jim Kerry. Despite of his tough and severe poverty childhood, he proved everyone and himself that each and every person could combat with unsatisfactory life circumstances.
To conclude, I reckon, that it is a personal option of everyone which life direction to choose: inactive and passive or challenging but successful. The way of struggling is not only the question of income level and success, it is about the proud of yourself and increase in self-esteem.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions vary with regard to the question whether it is worth to struggle with poor life ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, second, so, for instance, i reckon, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03703703704 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83226559402 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582716049383 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0836220158 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134042806601 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371291677036 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299128822285 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677631761108 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045698949632 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions vary with regard to the question whether it is worth to struggle with poor life ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, second, so, for instance, i reckon, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03703703704 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83226559402 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582716049383 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0836220158 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134042806601 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371291677036 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299128822285 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677631761108 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045698949632 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.