Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is apparent that today there is an increasing tendency in the variety of options to choose in each sphere. I completely agree with this statement and I will illustrate my arguments in this essay.
The first reason could be that we have overwhelming number of choices due to the trend of Internet development. Comparing the diversity of TV content in my childhood with today, I could state with confidence that it had to augment few times. Earlier, I was opting between 5 channels on TV and now, surfing the Internet I select from plethora of websites with various content: entertaining, educational, scientific and etc. For instance, Netflix is a paramount website amid teenagers which provide diversity of choice both series and blockbusters.
Alongside the influence of internet and globalization, nowadays students often face with the problem of bewildering what life path choose to go on further. It can be caused by a great variety of universities not only domestically but abroad, that students could opt for. The availability of grants, exchange programs, academic internships open the positive perspectives to opt for your own way of studying. Turning to the past, times of USSR, we could remember the tough period of Russian nation, when they get food by personal tickets and students wore identical uniforms throughout the country. The absence of either choice in shop galleries forced people to purchase what was available rather that what they had preferred.
And what can be seen in modern malls, its rows are full of chain stores, that struggling to survive in highly competitive environment by diversifying its products. So, it is actually common for customers to be embarrassed strolling around shops and choosing some new fashion closings. In conclusion, modern conditions of staggering number of choices, I suppose we have to be more bewildered than beneficial, but in fact this trend of diversification of all and everywhere has still increasing tendency.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...: entertaining, educational, scientific and etc. For instance, Netflix is a paramount we...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, so, still, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21630094044 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03032500983 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633228840125 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6873058002 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19220183094 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588164486879 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056971632023 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107429863827 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226941937697 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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