Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
there has always been a debate among people that whether to make a change when faced with unsatisfactory situations. some people prefer to withstand the bad things, while others would rather take some actions to get out of such situations.
The reasons for withstanding the suffering situation may involve the recognition that someone who acts hastily is unable to stay calm and make decisions carefully when confronted with difficulties. By contrast, those who have chosen not to change immediately may save a lot of trouble. they tend to be more considerate, which is of great importance in daily life, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of enduring hardship.
The obvious argument in its favor is that acting to improve the situations is a more positive attitude towards life than doing nothing. acting positively can bring about lots of opportunities, which might exert a profound impact on the rest of your life, and unlike just accepting the situation and doing nothing, taking some actions is also a good chance to improve your ability in aspects of working as well as managing your own life.
From my perspective, I advocate struggling for a better life and I believe that sticking to the present situation means that the unknown risks are not affordable. they prefer a more stable life. However, if there were a better social welfare system which can improve people’s security, those in bad situations would be more likely to make a change actively, rather than just praying and waiting passively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13833992095 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76982330413 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2857738095 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167783176957 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596044823765 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616930122717 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102107388857 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671728512756 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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