Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situatuion, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss and give your opinion
There is no doubt that a particular situation can affect a person life. Although some people believe that it is good to accept a bad one such as lack of money or doing an unsatisfied job, I would argue that it is necessary to try and improve these situations for a better future.
On the one hand, those who believe that it would be beneficial to admit a bad situation, such as doing an unsatisfactory work might argue that it will become worse if they go against it. This is because at present the unemployment rate in many nations is at an alarming level and it is very difficult for a person to find one. For example, in developing nations like Pakistan and India, people are doing the same jobs for years, because there is no alternative to this. In contrast, If there are chances for workers to get jobs, there will be satisfaction among them.
On the other hand, my view is that it is essential to overtake such situations for a bright future. For example, If you are facing a difficulty such as a shortage of money, you should try to do more work to earn more. Many students are doing part-time jobs to take care of their educational expenditures. If they do not do this, their future will be at stake.
In conclusion, despite a negative situation which can be harmful to your existing one if you resist, it is my firm belief that we should try to improve it and make sure a bright and healthier future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
..., I would argue that it is necessary to try and improve these situations for a better f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48659003831 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59704554392 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532567049808 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8762103977 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.454545455 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23773217702 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852850312414 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108329269748 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152559472441 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945117768368 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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