Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A couple of people admits that it is beneficial to give enough data in scientific research, business and in the educational world, however other admits that few reports are crucial to be shared openly. In this essay, I will examine both sides of view and will provide my opinion.
In Scientific Research, Researchers are working on new projects or existing ones. If they are working on a project that was done by some other scientists they need all the data to make it better. Business is sometimes difficult to run. To be a successful businessman you need to know the strategies which individuals used to be beneficial.
As far as education is concerned it is necessary for teachers to get or memorize the data in order to teach students for example, a recent research study in Pakistan found that the rural areas of the country where teachers do not have access to the data which they need to teach student are the reason why academic activities in many villages are not at the required level.
Many individuals admit that it is good to keep the information secret because if the data is accessed by the opposition this may cause them in very dangerous situations. For example, almost in every country, the information about their nuclear weapons and experiments going on them are kept a secret if this info is given to the opposition they will surely try to attack them and to vanish all the materials they have in their defences.
All in all, I conclude that the pros of sharing information or data in fields such as research, education and business outnumber the cons of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75451263538 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67310419949 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541516245487 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.779120898 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192634321002 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764099954832 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548975175049 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107163232993 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627918210048 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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