Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people have the opinion that information such as scientific research, business and the academic world should be shared as much as possible, while some people think that this information is too significant or priceless to be shared in public. I personally agree that some information should not be given to board regarding to the value. This essay will depict both views with personal thoughts as below;
On one hand, publishing the information such as scientific research or business knowledge in general is benefit to individuals. Not only people are able to study by themselves, but they can also select the reliable sources in order to broaden their knowledge. For instance, doctors can choose the alternative treatments for patients with heart-disease in initial stage. Apart from surgery, the published medical research of World Health Organization found that taking the specific medicine is also help. For the reasons, sharing information will give advantages.
On the other hand, doing the reliable researches and studying for the new knowledges has its own cost. The scientists or the company’s owners have to spend resources in order to get the results. Moreover, some information is considered to be the “trade secret” which publishing will definitely have negative impacts to the business. Then, from the reasons mentioned above, sharing key information in general should not be suited for the organization.
All in all, by comparing and outweighing between both opinions, I definitely admit that giving information should considered with the limits. Some information should not be shared independently because its valuable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...at taking the specific medicine is also help. For the reasons, sharing information w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, while, apart from, for instance, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53725490196 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02257557244 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572549019608 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4744793467 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351715037305 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119662296273 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122964153465 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2174963117 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121057974804 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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