Some People believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
it is often argued that it is crucial to establish a priority for sharing information, like the superiority of sharing should be distributed to scientific research, business and the academic field. Whereas, someone claim that a free information sharing is the most important. This essay will discuss both views as well as express my opinions.
To begin with, it may encourage a new invention when controlling the field of information sharing, since it is available to confirm the effectiveness of copyright entirely. For instance, Edison, who was the famous inventor with light bulb, despite he failed several times about light bulb testing, he did not give up his opportunity of being an inventor since the existence of copyright confirmed that he was possible to obtain a number of property, so the test of light bulb was succeed finally. it is clear that if the authority of copyright is not existed, some invention from some poor inventors will not invented as the motivation of product inventing is lost. Hence, saving the information is vital to conclude the message would not be stolen as well as prompting invention.
On the other hand, though the security of sharing is critical, the smooth sharing with free cannot be ignored. The advantage of opening information is obvious that everyone may know the incredible source from high-qualified expert and learn more about the field professionally. For instance, Google invented a renovated system which called Android, the company shared the invention transparently and let others fellow to get the program freely and improved it together. The reason was that it was slow to have further development as long as the invented system was not shared. Lastly, there was a spectacular advancing of the system with an unpredictable speed. Therefore, share the owned information may be useful as well as feasible to research more about it easily.
In conclusion, while it is valuable to have a security of sharing information, I strongly reckon that getting message with no fee should be concerned firstly as it is able to make a spectacular performance in one specific field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93643293699 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8609021515 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.714285714 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213894727321 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780494918427 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576865273634 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135213302282 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723958559485 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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