Easy access to internet has made modern society a public market to share information and knowledge. Based on this situation, some people claim that to share information in important fields like science, business, and academic subjects can be really beneficial to the world. I would say some of them are still too precious to spread freely.
It is true that some scientific studies being shared has helped to solve worldwide problems. As far as i know, one of the most well-known scientist in china, yuan long ping, has spent more than 50 years studying how to enhance the productivity of rice. His research has not only solved the problem of lack of food in poverty areas especially in china but also in many regions in the world.
However, as mentioned, some information is too important, or too dangerous to be shared freely. Take the nuclear energy for example, if the study of nuclear were mastered by any organization in the world, it would cause destructive and unexpected consequence.
Moreover, secrets in business are also valuable. Firstly, It is a symbol of civilized society to respect the intellectual property right. Secondly, it would be unfair to demand enterpreneurs to make their business secrets to public in this competitive market. This can be illustrated by the fact that employees who working in some scientific corporations must sign a commitment agreement when he leaves the company as a protection to the company's core technology.
To conclude, i insist that it would contribute to common progress to share some information benefiting the entire humankind. Still, some important knowledge should not be exposed to public as much as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21167883212 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90641132845 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616788321168 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8083055073 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349584981567 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114831077689 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104029080616 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190515508962 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880536365715 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.