Sharing information helps people to build their knowledge. Certain people believe that exchanging information related to scientific research, business and the academic world is important, whereas others think that there is no need to share some of the valuable information freely.
One evident benefit of exchanging information is that, it helps a person to expand his knowledge. Every person does not have every information on a subject but when we exchange details, our knowledge expands manifold. To illustrate, a person preparing for his exam by doing group study, will know more about the subject in less time than a person studying individually.
On the other hand, sharing information that is valuable and important can lead you in serious situations as you don't know whether the other person is trustworthy or not. For instance, there was a case recently where a person working on a scientific formula shared his theory with the other group in the same organization, one of the member of that group used this information for his own benefit and sold that formula. Moreover, nowadays the value of an idea is really high than a startup itself, if this idea gets stolen or exchanged, then chances are that huge penny that belonged to you is gone.
To conclude, sharing information is a key to expand one's knowledge but this may also result in passing on some of the salient details . In my opinion, people must ensure what information are least valuable and would not affect anyone if they are shared, only such details need to be shared insted of the whole thing. In this way, one is able to expand his knowledge without facing any serious complications.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rs think that there is no need to share some of the valuable information freely. One evi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n lead you in serious situations as you dont know whether the other person is trustw...
^^^^
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... sharing information is a key to expand ones knowledge but this may also result in p...
^^^^
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... but this may also result in passing on some of the salient details . In my opinion, people...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n passing on some of the salient details . In my opinion, people must ensure what ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98207885305 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71126711848 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573476702509 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6111725317 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272727576173 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111854161922 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119323746657 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189993188161 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148641926053 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.