Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both the views and give our opinion.
Nowadays, we all lives in modern era, where sharing is critical parts of human beings. there are split opinions between sharing a more data in terms of scientific research, academic world and business. some believes that it is superior to share this information, while other group of thinkers support these information is valuable. however, both has its own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both the opinion would be discussed.
To start with, there are so many benefits to distribute significant information. First and foremost, many people can get benefits from shared information around the globe who have lack of resources. For instance, in a recent study by United nations, many poorer children get advantage from data published by scientists on television, and even they make some science equipment to learning from television and radio. Apart from this, students may receive help from the online plateforms to complete their college or school projects without paying anything else. To explain this, different publisher from around the world publish their articles in online website and students get optimistic from those website and notice their development in advance research.
however, there are so many outcomes of sharing a crucial information. Firstly, enemy nations may acquire advantage if any country share some scientific data. For instance, in the ending of 20th century, the USA shared space data in online plateforms and Russia collected those data and launched their own space shuttle before the US. Secondly, small business organizations may distinguish big company. To describe this, if largest company shared their details about their products, then some small organisation getting leverage from them, they copy their products and sell in a cheaper price.
To conclude and give my opinion, I would say that distich information is better for needy people and students for their growth in terms of research and development is the most appropriate way to deal with this situation. In a big picture, this would help to mitigate some academic issue around the globe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
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Message: Did you mean 'this website' or 'those websites'?
Suggestion: this website; those websites
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35329341317 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66174905434 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2043075397 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.176470588 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214491230383 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720901871007 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618138278081 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142100369648 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766394686115 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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