Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others believe that information is too important and valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your opinions.
There are countless discussions whether information should be shared freely or not. As far as I am concerned, information is so important and valuable that it couldn't be used without any expenses.
On the one hand, it is obvious that publicising information has some advantages. It makes everyone can access the latest news not only in their fields but also all over the world. In addition, sharing information in science can helps to invent something that is helpful to human life. For example, physicists had countless inventions after Marie Curie's research of uranium.
On the other hand, revealing information is not a good idea because of these drawbacks. First of all, nowadays, information is so non-sustainable and valuable that people consider it secrets. For example, when FBI was investigating a terrorist, Apple was required to unlock his iCloud but the firmed denied. The reason was that Apple has guaranteed to their customers about the information safety. Moreover, information in business is business secrets. If the secrets are unveiled, the company's benefit will be affected.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the opinion that infomation shouldn't be announced because of all the disadvantages I've mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34871794872 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04183411228 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65641025641 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.052484428 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2307692308 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273002281387 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921331405335 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660057469925 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142014836318 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788172648364 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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