The health issue is one of the most significant concerns in the world. Healthy diet and exercise are two major elements of a healthy body.
Who is responsible for citizen healthy diet? Government or people themselves? There are two points of view, some people believe that it is the government job to take care of peoples diet but others think that it is individuals responsibility. In this essay, we want to investigate these two beliefs.
On the one hand, governments have a principal role in people diet. As they should control restaurants and fast food activities such as authorize all gradients they used in preparing meals. They also should awareness people about the benefits of a healthy diet and its impacts on body and lifestyle.
On the other hand, people, themselves should take care of their diet and make healthy food, reduce eating junk food and exercise. Their body needs the energy to do daily tasks, as a result, their diet should contain nutrition and enough vitamins. Also, children usually inherit diet from their parents, if adults do not have healthy food habit, their children eat like them and these bad food habits effect on the next generation. Additionally, the bad diet may destroy your style and make you obese and this obesity is dangerous for the heart and boost the risk of some diseases like cholesterol or heart attack.
In conclusion, take care of diet is important for individuals and governments, but in my opinion, it mostly is a personal responsibility to be conscious of what you eat.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90733590734 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70852104 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7774254839 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7857142857 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445243559663 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144901105994 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937981576574 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213891916557 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868726305835 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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