Some people believe that it s not necessary to have internet access to live a full life What is your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience

We all are living in the world of technology. It is said necessity is the mother of all inventions. One such invention is of internet. Internet has sown its seeds in every arena. It has become a vital part of people's life. No one can imagine a day without it. So I believe it cannot be separated from our life. In this essay, I am going to give possible reason for my believe.

Human beings has three basic needs: good, clothes and shelter. But now internet has also become a part of these. No one can survive without it. Beside giving knowledge or information; it even helps to polish one's skills. It has become a source of education also. People are totally rely on it. Whether it is politics, business or education; internet has proven a boon for it. In today's world imagining a life without it is impossible. A recent report published in Economics journal shows that almost 75% of the world's population uses internet either for work or study. In addition to this, internet has also solved the problem of communication.

Another possible reason is that now people are addicted to internet. It has become a part of their life. It has spread its roots not only in cities but also in rural areas. Education is being provided to illiterate people through it. There is no denying fact that people of remote areas are also using these facilities and has gained a lot. The best epitome of this is India where prime minister Narendra Midi has launched "Digital India" campaign in order to spread internet services to every door steps; even in villages. Hence, considering above reasons it is clear that life is not possible without internet.

In conclusion, it is being seen that it all depends upon the need of an individual. Internet should be used in such a way that it should not become an addiction and also fulfill the purpose of using.

Votes
Average: 8.3 (9 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...am going to give possible reason for my believe. Human beings has three basic needs:...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...or information; it even helps to polish ones skills. It has become a source of educa...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ls. It has become a source of education also. People are totally rely on it. Whether...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...cs journal shows that almost 75% of the worlds population uses internet either for wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67889908257 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57079433855 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544342507645 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4515840946 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.6666666667 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1111111111 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.92592592593 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 3.4128256513 498% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149267892917 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424854811905 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352281242059 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094111918944 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497117411828 0.056905535591 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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