Some people believe that it’s not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
It is thought by some people that in order to live a full life having the internet connection is not mandatory. In my opinion, I think that it is totally possible to pass a whole life without getting the internet access.
One good reason to consider why the internet is not essential for our lives is that the internet is not one of the basic human needs such as food, clothes, and houses. It is merely a tool which is only necessary to accomplish some of our accessory tasks such as communication and entertainment. To illustrate, people only consider getting the internet connection when they have extra money in their hand after fulfilling all of their basic livelihood demands.
Another good reason to consider is that to what extent the internet helps us in our day-to-day living? In other words, there are a few aspects in which the internet has proven its efficacy. For example, it fastens the process of social and business communication as well as has enriched our information technology. But, are these really so crucial for human existence? It can be observed that without these advantages of Internet people lived their lives in the past and living at present somewhere in the world and hopefully would live in the future.
Finally, it is undeniable that yet, not only most of the part of the world is not covered by the Internet service but also there are some people who even do not hear about the term internet. So, what happened to them? Are not they living their lives? Perhaps, they would see their last sunset without having knowledge on the internet.
In conclusion, I want to go with those people who think that living a whole life does not necessitate the internet access at all.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, really, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75838926174 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57427828678 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51677852349 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.161231338 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244145277383 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868518226988 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533566044988 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152553505635 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463578595017 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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