Some people believe that libraries should be funded, while others think that they are useless as we have the Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a well known fact that due to the incredibly fast development of modern technology and other significantly important fields an enormous quantity of useful information is totally necessary today to be a high-qualified adept. Nowadays, some individuals think that libraries are the best source of knowledge and it is compulsory to fund them whereas others consider libraries as ineffectual facilities because a large range of data is available on the Internet.
On the one hand, there is an explicit speculation that the community has to support and improve libraries states because during the time a large number of remarkable books can be spoiled by various factors such as average level of moisture, sun rays and others. In addition to this,currently, no matter what kind of activity you live and breath there is an essential requirement to analyse and compare all reliable information. For example, you will never be totally sure that data on the Internet is completely correct whereas knowledge from highly famous books was proven by scientists and other clever people.
On the other hand, in comparison with past times, modern life is much faster, so acquiring accurate information from books might be slow to keep up to date. The Internet is an outstanding tool that allows you to search and obtain data from any kind of digital device no matter where you are. Presently, all digital devices are pretty compact and convenient to utilize whereas books can be a cause of discomfort and uncomfortableness. For instance, it is a common occasion when an individual can not find right book or proper details from a certain book but using the Internet in most cases you will undoubtedly get the proper information.
In conclusion, after all arguments have been discussed in detail, I suppose that the most excellent way to search information is a combination of books and the Internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ibraries states because during the time a large number of remarkable books can be spoiled by vari...
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Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , currently
...sun rays and others. In addition to this,currently, no matter what kind of activity you li...
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Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... combination of books and the Internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, whereas, after all, as to, for example, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07371794872 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97224276784 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.5414602598 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.3 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.2 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136263882269 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556681541976 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490263890194 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920025655467 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417037027124 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.