The amount of sport shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having impact on live sports events. Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages?
Over the years different types of sport have developed with enormous strides and have reached a point that nowadays sport is indispensable and important part of our life. Currently, we can observe situation when the quantity of sport events shown on television per week has dramatically risen and this change may have an effect on live game actions. In my view, to do so can be a positive and rewarding experience but the drawbacks of these changes are more significant than the benefits.
On the one hand, there is explicit speculation that broadcasting of television sport events definitely provides a giant pleasure for everyone. First of all, millions of people can seize the opportunity of monitoring live time sport events just by having any digital device with internet access which means you can watch diverse competitions anytime and anywhere. Secondly, another minor but significant benefit is that if under any circumstances you were not able to watch a sports event you can watch it anyway because in most cases television broadcasts competitions and highlights again. Finally, observing professional games is inextricably linked with your playing abilities and skills because in most cases television broadcasts only advanced games.
Despite those sain advantages, it should be mentioned that an access to sports recording has negative experience in a few aspects. Firstly, there is a crucial decrease in financial position of organizations due to low attendance of individuals in live matches. In addition to this, the success of the team depends in part on the level of fan support as well as the psychological motivation of players to be the champion. Finally, the whole gist of the professional competitions is the presence of spectators at the present time.
In conclusion, while various arguments have been mentioned for pros and cons, it seems to me that the number of television sport events should be decreased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in most cases, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2347266881 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98625726402 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607717041801 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.084352063 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4166666667 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377639703269 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119724693694 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855871017429 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213300614966 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10425158817 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.