Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is considered that variety kinds of human needs particularly foods, clothes and possessions are provided to people in modern days. The production of goods and services has been increased due to the globalization and technological high development. Personally absolutely agree with this opinion.
First of all, many different cultures are getting popular in every country through the nationalization. It increases the supply of imported goods hugely and makes customer's wants inexhaustible. To say, Korean culture specially art, fashion and cuisine are becoming widen in our country. Me also in favor of Korean cosmetics and tried to get a foundation from the mall recently. If sales staff could not helped me, I would have been in two minds due to the plenty of choices.
Secondly, factories are producing numerous eye-catching products using cutting-edge technology. Companies are desiring for automation with high capacity while customers' needs increasing. New generation of machines are creating diversity options of products which could not imagined last decades. For instance, When I was young, fewer model of mobile phones used to be sold in the market. Nowadays, decision making for smart phone is tough for everyone and it has been renewed speedy and offering new designs each year.
In conclusion, people will have more choices continuously because of the broaden culture and firm competitiveness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ee with this opinion. First of all, many different cultures are getting popular in every c...
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Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...mall recently. If sales staff could not helped me, I would have been in two minds due ...
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Line 6, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: New
...pacity while customers needs increasing.New generation of machines are creating div...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ve more choices continuously because of the broaden culture and firm competitiveness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55299539171 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05265366316 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709677419355 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6402829812 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6923076923 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903015087907 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321253203871 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489793729297 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0431320651248 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032979612856 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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