Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The world has been totally changed compared to the past due to many achievements of human being. On this developing basis, some people say that today they have a great deal of options to select. To me, I strongly believe that statement truly reflects our life nowadays and that is all thank to the Internet and globalisation.
Firstly, the Internet has a great contribution to our diverse selections. Since the Internet was born, it has been not only aiding people to quickly and easily complete many aspects in life but also giving them chances to freely create many convenient products and services to serve people’s need. Therefore, a lot of online shopping websites and apps are built, a large amount of products with a variety of style, pattern, type, material, price and other countless aspects for each category are produced in just a short period of time. Due to a tremendous amount of items cramming in the community, citizens now have to carefully decide which product is suitable with their budget and hobbies, therefore.
Besides, globalization is also give a big hand in multiple-choice creation. Closer connection between nations makes the law of trading be simply happened. The goods in a specific country now can be from domestic source or importation. As a consequences, people have even more choices when they make a purchase decision, except impulse buy.
To sum up, owing to the development of the Internet and tightly bond among countries all around the world, diversity in goods and services markets have appeared for high demand satisfaction of humankind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Suggestion: given
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a consequence' or simply 'consequences'?
Suggestion: a consequence; consequences
...from domestic source or importation. As a consequences, people have even more choices when the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83528528505 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662835249042 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5358785384 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154589080915 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047244681733 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480381639886 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848552291612 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644695615189 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.