Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
According to modern life, convenience is the aim of all scientist to create innovated inventions. Consequently, it is believed that more options are given as well. Personally, I definitely stand in agreement site due to some particularly reasons which are clarified below..
Firstly, thinking in novel way, the best visible illumination for the mentioned reason is that most of people nowadays are trapped in confusion when they are making choices due to accumulation. These exist ubiquitously all around the world as well as small pierces of people’s life. For instance, people can not give a direct decision when numerous dished in their favour are proposed periodically. That may sound unreasonable, but the occurrence increase gradually thanks to extensive backup.
Secondly, as a result of competitive economy, the diversity of the products are improved to serve human requirements in the ascendant. Therefore, there are a great deal of distinct models or versions for every single category along with abundant selections. Obviously, a product may have various criteria to be purchased individually such as size,color, price, quality or origin leading to tremendous multiple of alteration. For example with 3 alternative smart phone with 2 colors, 2 sizes, and 2 dissimilar prices, we can make up to 8 choices in total.
In conclusion, as civilian’s need go up, the arising variance of goods is also desirable. It is indicated in the swelling number of individuals making choices arduously and the modernization which generates a huge quantities of gadgets and apparatus to comfort human life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ularly reasons which are clarified below.. Firstly, thinking in novel way, the b...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...nation for the mentioned reason is that most of people nowadays are trapped in confusion when ...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deals'?
Suggestion: deals
...ascendant. Therefore, there are a great deal of distinct models or versions for ever...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , color
...o be purchased individually such as size,color, price, quality or origin leading to tr...
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'phone' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'phones'.
Suggestion: phones
...n. For example with 3 alternative smart phone with 2 colors, 2 sizes, and 2 dissimila...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'quantity'?
Suggestion: quantity
...he modernization which generates a huge quantities of gadgets and apparatus to comfort hum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44621513944 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2111356064 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685258964143 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4451439935 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0959411268196 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278697849242 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026713884798 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467424606078 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289569183357 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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