Some people believe that online newspapers will one day replace traditional print newspapers completely. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of online information sources, it is often believed that the printing press will be no longer suitable for the new area. Personally, I completely agree with this belief since both readers and journalists can benefit from virtual newspapers.
Firstly, audiences can enjoy great convenience from reading online newspapers. Online news is ubiquitous and easy to get access to since people just simply need a smart phone or an iPad and internet connection to read the news at their own convenience anywhere. By contrast, when reading physical newspapers, the reader has to buy them every day, which is really time – consuming. My father, for example, has a habit of reading a newspaper every morning before going to work. In the past, he had to go to the nearest newsagent which was three kilometers away from home, taking him 30 minutes to buy his favourite newspaper. However, with the popularity of newspapers on the Internet, he now can utilise that amount of time to read more news around the world at home instead of going to the newsstand.
Secondly, the development of virtual newspapers makes journalists become more independent. It is obvious that with online versions, journalists can post news on their own websites instead of having to submit to the editor and then wait for their news to be published. An example is Hoang Minh Tri, who is a journalist on Facebook. Besides being a contributor to many prestigious online newspapers, such as VnExpress and Thanh Nien Online, he also posts many articles on education, business and social life on his personal Facebook page. His articles attract many readers’ interest and they are shared widely on this social networking site. Now he is a very popular and respected journalist and writer, who has more than 70 thousand followers on Facebook.
In conclusion, with the advantages brought by online newspapers mentioned above, I believe the traditional printing press will be soon replaced by the online versions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e soon replaced by the online versions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82589365177 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7117089876 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.933333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163536328342 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555506602912 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802532066906 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135103621597 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110843277169 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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