Some people believe that paparazzi should not follow celebrities everywhere and invade their privacy while others believe that this is just the price of fame.
There is no doubt that personal lives of stars have always been the center of attention of their fans. It is believed by many that renowned people should not have any private life as they are public figures whereas many others think it is an invasion of privacy to follow them and have photographs when they are not in work. This essay will discuss both the views and express my support for the latter one.
The reason behind celebrities being followed by journalists all the time is the demand of news about them to their fans, who consider it as their right to know them more exclusively. For example, if correspondents did not write story about the life of Pele, his fans would have been deprived of taking inspiration from his life. So, although personal lives of stars are often presented negatively, many fans believe they have right to know whom they idolise.
On the other hand, everyone, whether a public figure or not, has right to preserve their privacy. This is because people should value a person by their professional work, not by their personal activities. Moreover, this over-enthusiasm can sometimes be fatal. For instance, princess Diana died in an accident while trying to escape paparazzi. Therefore, it is unethical to expose the personal life of those popular figures who are not willing to bring their private issues in public.
In conclusion, though people are keen to know ins and out of their role models, it is the invasion of privacy to follow them all the places and make story about them. In my opinion, fans should respect their idols' desire of maintaing secrecy about their personal life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8458781362 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47580239779 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5794284821 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222066220656 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749740102158 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493238857916 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137023093693 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314995053598 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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