Some people believe that parents have to teach their children. However, others argue that schools take the responsibility to educate students to be good member in the society. Discuss both views.
As countries develop there has been a trend towards smaller family size.How does this affect society?
In these days, there is a considerably development in many countries. this is a trend that is having effects on family sizes. Although often debated, it is felt as countries develop, the number of members of family decrease are the base precursors to this advantage. In this essay, a look at these causes and their affects will be made.
Firstly, the greatest causes of small family size are that people’">people’s outlook increase and they modernize. A lot of people say that when family size is large, cost of living is more than smaller family. Most people think about their future career and they believe that magnitude of family may make some problems for them. Such as looking after children, their medical education costs and others
The major effects of this are entirely positive. In some countries the number of people are very high, for example Chine, India. that is why, a rate of poverty is higher than other countries and this case may effect on state economy negatively. However, if the number of population are smaller, government can provide the population easily with work places, high wage and other important things. Therefore, people’">people’s prosperity becomes very good and this factor effects on people’">people’s life style positively.
Following this look at the causes and effects of a decrease of family sizes, I think that this factor is beneficial for people. Thus, as a result of a development of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26086956522 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.83328708729 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4615728022 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134807590597 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456995488386 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386764953527 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622046778918 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571184686193 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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