Some people believe that parents should be responsible for encouraging their children to take regular exercise. Others argue that the main responsibility for encouraging children to do so should lie with schools.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, public concern has arisen about whether parents or schools should shoulder the responsibility for stimulating children to take regular exercise. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and give my own idea.
First of all, it is generally believed that parents stand a bigger chance to share time with children and teach them good habits. Moreover, taking exercise from the young age can form a healthy lifestyle during their lifelong and thus, difficult to be given up. Some parents also do that with their children to be a good model as well as draw in them a basic awareness of health protection. In addition, every pair of parents usually have one to two children, which means they can give enough care and attention to their children’s health while it is impossible at a school with thousands of students.
On the other hand, it may be tempting to argue that not all parents are available to deal with their children and have necessary knowledge on exercises for kids. In this case, schools are proved to be a reliable place for this burden as they are quipped with suitable facilities and labours to maintain students’ physical performance. Above all, children usually find it easier to keep disciplines under the strict control at schools and sometimes are enthusiastic to take exercise with their friends.
All things considered, I firmly believe that schools and parents should reach a consensus on how to cooperate in helping children with regular exercises to give them more motivations and conditions to keep healthy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in addition, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07003891051 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71317575074 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.757330629 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.3 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417353337425 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157937232262 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658738302465 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248344981526 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387092841692 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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