Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the role of education in modern life is more imperative than ever before. However, there are always plenty of arguments in this field involving whether family or school should be the one to be responsible for educating children to become a good citizen. In this essay, I will discuss both view and give my own opinion.
First of all, it is generally believed that family is the basic unit of society and all foundation should be formed from young age. Parents have more opportunities to communicate with their children and teach them essential social values. Moreover, characteristics are usually formed very early and have significant impacts on a child's future. Therefore, leaving this responsibility to parents is a suitable choice as it saves both effort and time to deal with several children with different problems at the same time.
However, people who support the first view often forget one important factor in the development of a child. Although most of the characteristic is built during their childhood, many social opinions, including how they evaluate an issue, how they react to urgent social problems and so on, are not completely made up until their teenager time. Consequently, school plays a virtual role in this period to help them form a good point of view and get a clear awareness of their duties. Furthermore, their school life also contributes to their attitude toward surrounding people and decide whether they can obtain certain elements of a citizen.
All things considered, I firmly believe that both parents and school should co-operate to help children become a good member of society because it is the duty of everybody to build a greater community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.124 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8068174148 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0344076905 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253386091193 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801556371883 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639628981155 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153291299432 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408566869451 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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