Some people believe people cannot solve environmental problems, whereas others believe individuals are responsible for solving environmental problems.
Discuss both views and give your own.
Opinions are divided on whether it is viable for humankind to deal with current environmental issues or is it a responsibility of each person to help mitigate environmental problems. Personally, I totally agree that it is necessary for individuals to contribute their effort in saving the environment.
For a variety of reasons, it is justifiable to say that individuals can, to a significant extent, contribute to the rectification of existing climate issues. The main reason is that small actions coming from personal effort can accumulate, forming a more noticeable impact in the fight against environmental crisis. In addition, under the right context, individuals can combine opinions, applying their political influence to pressure governments to introduce measures against corporate environmental irresponsibility. By doing this, several environmental pollutions, such as water pollution caused by the contamination from a number of factories, can be alleviated.
Apart from the abovementioned practical concerns, it is believed that solving problems related to environmental pollutions is beyond human’s capacity. This is mainly because significant costs are required to address environmental concerns. Hence, it will take a larger financial budget rather than one’s finance to actually eradicate the problems of environment. Furthermore, another factor is the impracticality of implementing laws and regulations in expectations of fully standardising public environmental responsibility. To elaborate, protecting the environment relies heavily on people’s awareness. Therefore, despite certain laws, it is unlikely to wipe out environmental issues unless people can change their perception of how vital the natural environment is.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that people should be in charge of protecting the environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, apart from, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1320754717 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61722078713 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2528416724 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275414890296 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089911543112 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502280235533 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153192385482 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623711190513 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.27 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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