Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial, however, most make no effort to do so. Why do you think this is happening? What are some simple actions that could help the environment.
Environment is a canopy in which all the human being are residing with flora and fauna and it is an important task for human being to save this. While, unfortunately less proportion of people are in the favor of save natural environment others are doing no effort. In this essay, I shall embark light on the reasons behind this phenomea as well suggest some measures to eradicate this problem.
Categorically speaking, If we spot a light on the reasons that why some people are in the favor of save natural environment. I think, there are plethora of reasons behind this. The foremost reason is natural habitat like people live in this era are thought that they live in the environment which is neat and clean so, due to this reason people want to provide this habitat to their off springs. Moreover, this natural habitat can lead a cure life for their upcoming generation because, it consists of number of tress, less pollution areas, many more things. The best epitome is that, there had been survey conducted by World Health Organisation in that survey they conclude that preseve natural environment is vital to provide to a cure life for upcoming generation.
On the flip side, numerous of people are doing no effort to save environment. Broadly speaking, people want to make their life easier and due to this reason, people destroy this environment by seven types of pollution: water, air, soil, noise, light, thermal, radioactive pollution. Along with this, air pollution is most effecting and increasing pollution as compared to other reported by pollution department. Well air pollution is increased by the increase of comfort zone of human being. In addition to this, people like to use cars for their short purpose and open new industries to find new ways to make their life easy. No doubt, new inventions make their comfortable but, it is also detrimental to the environment. Aside from that, this could be probably be solved by grow more and more trees, use cars when there is some emergency and also use Compressed Natural Gas in cars instead of petrol and diesel.
In conclusion, This essay discussed the reason and beneft of save natural habitat in first body paragraph. In addition to this, the second body paragraph includes the reasons and solutions that why some people doing no effort and how we change it; to save this beautiful environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...residing with flora and fauna and it is a important task for human being to save ...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...abitat like people live in this era are think that they live in the environment which...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ngs. Moreover, this natural habitat can leads a cure life for their upcoming generati...
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Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists'?
Suggestion: consists
...r their upcoming generation because, it consist of number of tress, less pollution area...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, broadly speaking, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90773067332 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59628185554 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481296758105 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5913254286 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.764705882 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5882352941 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292580021619 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106088561451 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741815515692 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197026128392 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124114192436 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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