Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial. However, most make no effort to do so.
Why do you think this is happening? What are some simple actions that could help the environment?
In recent time, the world where we live in today, is dominated by the carbon emission which is affected by people only as sometime, they are not think to solve it by several kind of solution which may overcome the critical situation. Both the aspects would be described in ensuing paragraphs.
There are number of mankind act such as userusers of technologiesare not even study about their drawbacks in terms of pollution so it may assist to create unfair atmosphere. Because of this, technophile cars and automobiles tend to emite carbon dioxide in the god gifted environment. Another reason is, some entrepreneurs are willing to earn merely more money without taking account of surrended area where they release polluted fumes. As, ar some level, these kinds of technologies are advantageous to live stress free so all the people are not taking initiative towards it in this materialistic world.
Every situation have such solutions which assist to solve problems. Firstly, in modern eta, filters of combustion engine should be provided into every automotive machine which would be helped to release clean air. Moreover, parliament should make strict norms towards Mechenical engines. Secondly, such factories which contribute to improve harmful gases into environment, must be illegal under the constitution. Finally other than these, awareness play vital role to overcome these type of issues so societyand non governmental organisation should aware general people by street act and poster presentation.
To draw the curtain, technophile appratus and gadgets are responsible to make harmful it. However some solution such as awareness program and forming tight rules by ministry, may decline the rate of danger gases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...y people only as sometime, they are not think to solve it by several kind of solution...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...time, they are not think to solve it by several kind of solution which may overcome the crit...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...aterialistic world. Every situation have such solutions which assist to solve pr...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...must be illegal under the constitution. Finally other than these, awareness play vital ...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ets are responsible to make harmful it. However some solution such as awareness program...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41111111111 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83019433962 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659259259259 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.628593086 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956043148395 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302819687039 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273755217545 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551720986073 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261743107966 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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