The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion.
In 21st century , where advent of technology in each and every field such as education, banking and many more . Due to advancement of computer where researchers believe that in up coming years. Computer will take over humans’ mind and become intelligent but some residents support them while another group of citizens deplore this concept which this essay shall address in following paragraphs.
On the other hand , if computer becomes more intelligent than humankind so it has millions of merits. Firstly, this advancement will increase productivity with high accuracy of work also minimizing some mistakes. This is because, computer is a artificial intelligence which run by softwares and it has deferent kind of applications which helps in rise productivity. For example, Banking sector which generally use computer system for store indispensable data as well as they can be do transactions within a friction of seconds without any mistake. According to Indian bank organization , after advent of computer they minimize their work issues and today their employees are stress free about complex calculations. This way frist group of people favor this statement.
On contrary, some commentators believe it is a wrong development. If computer takes place of human so it will be some extent negative for human’s health. This is because , person will merely depends on technology and iron-out their quarry by computer rather than books or meet with other people. Not only this but they will suffer from some health regarding issues such as obesity, eyesight, back pain and many more. For instance, today’s generation suffered from few diseases and this percentage will be swing up side and this happens by over usage of computer. By this reason few citizen do not support this phenomenon.
To sum up , as per my verdict , both group of residents are most appreciate on their views but I favor of frist crowd of residents , who support the computer intelligence become more beneficial by it will increase work accuracy with less time consumption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29357798165 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89605165189 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599388379205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2517280831 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221142125194 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080644948093 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634089622577 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140489212701 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196808067374 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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