Traffic on roads has become a problem in nearly every country in the world What can be done to reduce the amount of traffic at a society level and at an individual level

Essay topics:

Traffic on roads has become a problem in nearly every country in the world.
What can be done to reduce the amount of traffic at a society level and at an individual level?

The world where we live in today, is dominated by the population. Because of this, traffic congestion has stucked by travelers which is a serious problem in every nation on the earth. It may be overcome by society and personality which are described in ensuing paragraphs.

There are number of solutions to reduce vehicles such as awareness programmes should be organised by the Non Governmental Organisation (NGO). They should describe the problem about global warming as well as pollutions. Because of this,carbon dioxide will increased in the surrounded atmosphere.They should also commence the march, poster presentation and small street act about awareness of atmosphere by reducing the rate of use of vehicles. For Example, Bachpan which is the infamous non-government organisation in anand area,had performed various mute act on the road. Thus,some riders were took outh to try reduce the use of vehicle as much as possible.

Individual may be responsible to declining vehicles rate. People should use either public transport services or share their vehicle with others. Because of this, rate of vehicles will plunge in future. Another point is that, all people should follow the norms of government by following the street sign and signas; it may really assist to manage traffic flow. For instance, in United States Of America, individual respect to traffic controler as well as rules; as a result, people are not stucked in traffic and reach their destination within a expected time duration.

To draw the curtain, society should play integral role to solve social problems by awareness programmes. Simultaneously, people should contribute by following the regulation of driving rules. Consequently, it would assist to come out from stuck area.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (30 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, may, really, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38768115942 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93755236986 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7854380693 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134740664428 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423264805094 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036930725294 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828630892462 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394860196451 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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