Some people believe that prison is not an effective method of reducing crime, while others feel it helps to stop criminals from re-offending.
Discuss both views, and present your opinion.
Prison is a widely-recognized technique of cutting crime in many countries. Lots of people claim that putting criminals behind bars isn’t a very efficient method; while on the other hand, there are clearly some advantages.
Many argue that jail is an act of “pouring money down the drain” because it’s mostly government-funded, which means that while Incarcerated, convicts will receive three hots and a cot, that was paid by the tax of working class people. Another weakness of prison is that it enables criminals to interact with each other. For instance, they will be influenced by different atrocious ideas and might become more professional criminals when they got released.
Despite these negatives effects, prison can stop lawbreakers from committing crime, this helps improving living conditions. Moreover, it can be used as a scare tactic to deters to future criminals. If children acknowledge the fact that crime does not pay, this will lessen their potential of becoming a villain. Needless to say, it is better to keeps outlaws locked up and monitored rather than letting them freely violate every single rule out there. In addition, the idea of prison is simple and easy to adapt to most communities.
In conclusion, there can be no doubt that there are strengths and weaknesses to this concept; however, it is obvious that prison reduces criminal activity in various crime-ridden countries. Its efficiency and ease of use has helped youngsters and adults to sleep better on their bed with less worries. Therefore, I think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to improve' or 'improve'.
Suggestion: to improve; improve
...akers from committing crime, this helps improving living conditions. Moreover, it can be ...
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Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun worries is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...dults to sleep better on their bed with less worries. Therefore, I think that the ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99229820035 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698039215686 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4393713037 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194503160864 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595729334979 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560390038312 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114244820042 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455258912379 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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