Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that activites, which is done by the child, is effect on their futuer. So many of people said that reading book and magezin is better as compaired to watching and playing games on digital screen. I agree with the statment and this essay will discuse about the benefit of reading and disadvantages of playing video games.
On the one hand, There are plenty of advantages of the reading the storie books. The first and formost benifit is that children can develop their imageinary skill. For example, childre should read about the historical stories, so they can image about the historical places. Communication skill is the second advantage of reading. To illustrate, when student can read the book, it enhans ont only reading skill, but also writting skill, which helpfull in their letter life.
On the other hand, watching tv and plaing games on the computer has some negetive impect on student health and study. Firstly, today children spend their most of time on the screen, which Iead some health problem such as blindness and some eye problem. Farthermore, most of the games are using digital grafics,which attrect young children. So they can spend hours and hours on computer and do not focus on study, which directly impect on their future study.
To Conclude, traditonly, people think that reading a books is helpfull children future compare to playing and watching game. I thing reading a story books benificial for children in study becouse it lead some prectical skill like writting and reading.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a book; books
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Suggestion: think; thinks
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Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, for example, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98818897638 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45485306131 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555118110236 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.727597571 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306081098444 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102552615738 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829883287533 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194287742894 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791262386867 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.