Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that reading books is more beneficial for children than watching TV or playing games on the screen. In my opinion, I completely agree with this view for some reasons.
There are several positive reasons to explain the advantages of books. First of all, a regular habit of reading stories stimulates the imagination. By spending time on books, young people use their creativity to visualize characters and the scenery. Furthermore, teenagers can learn a lot of meaningful knowledge from reading. For example, a lesson from Cinderella - a well-known fairy tale teaches children to never stop believing in their dreams and themselves. Finally, reading requires more attention from children than watching TV or using computers. Reading books need to fully understand the content, therefore encourage children to research and foster their curiosity.
In contrast, I would reckon that spending excessive time playing games and television leads to serious problems. Firstly, children are likely to build sedentary life. Wasting too much time entertaining on the screen is harmful to health such as obesity, heart-attacked and diseases related to their eyes. Secondly, young people being addicted to games will lack interaction. Instead of joining extracurricular activities like playing football, running and swimming,... youngsters use their time on playing computer games. This problem makes them lose contact and communication skills with their friends and other people.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that it is better to read stories from books than watch TV or play games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...e playing football, running and swimming,... youngsters use their time on playing ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50597609562 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89265845116 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641434262948 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6613685724 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2941176471 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391156617372 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108977915634 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122526067944 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275757705975 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121643650268 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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