Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, With the advent of modern society, technological applications are seem to be more ubiquitous especially children. Some think that it is a good thing for children to read stories from a book instead of binging to watch TV or keep their eyes glued on the screen of computer to play games. According to me, I totally agree with this viewpoint.
On the one hand, one evident strength is that when childre have preference for reading over watching TV or play games, they avoid the encounter with unorthodox information or sexually explicit content on websites.For instance, Due to children ‘s curiosity, when they are watching a certain games on the internet, a web sex all of a sudden appear and children with their inquisitivess may click on and watch it.This enable chilldren have some misleading thoughts in the life. Furthermore, playing games or watching TV in the long run will surely deteriorate children’s health. Because it not only make their eyes be more weaken but also cause some mental problems for children such as emotional distress when just sitting at home like cough potato to stay glued to the television or computer.
In addition to that, when children choose reading stories as a way of relaxation , this can strengthen family bond specifically between parents and children. Simply because children would feel excited when listening stories from their parents. Parents can take advantage of an opportunity to teach and share the meaningful, educational lessons for children in easily way .Somehow parents creates a close relationship with their children more.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that reading stories from book would bring certainly children with great joy with funny stories or pictures and it will be surely be far more benefical for children than ever before

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14093959732 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76337172825 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597315436242 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.43410609 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.2 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320413366829 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132133154401 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906777582148 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202763171014 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432066485639 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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