Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
It is thought that homework is a necessary aspect in the schooling of children, while others argue that homework is of an unnecessity in the schooling of young people. I think it is necessary when giving homework to children.
There are many reasons why people are not in favor of giving children homework. Firstly, an overload school schedule makes children tired after a long day. For example, in countries like Sweden or Finland, there are limited homework assignments, and those countries have some of the most developed education systems in the world. The fact that children have too much homework will discourage both parents and children. To alleviate that pressure, some countries have encouraged teachers and students to complete assignments before going home. For instance, the Ministry of Education of many countries such as Korea and Germany have asked teachers to assign less homework to school students to avoid the heavy workload for them.
Although there are many opinions in favor of not giving students work, I have always supported the idea that homework is important in students’ learning process. The main benefit of doing the test is beneficial for mastering knowledge and self-development. The evidence is that students who do the test always understand and remember the lesson better than students who don't. The absence of homework will make children not used to the form of testing at school, so students should do more homework to pass important exams at school.
In conclusion, although doing homework can be stressful for students, I still believe that homework is a necessary aspect of education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20912547529 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75805130444 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536121673004 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8439083839 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.384615385 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349033154009 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137695972356 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885305290253 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2198024572 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767481739525 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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