Every parents wants to give their children a best environment irrespective to their income and status. There are few parents who think that providing teaching to their children at house is far better way as they feel more comfortable and safe. But, There are many peoples who believe that schooling have great weightage, because school are specially meant for providing education. As per my opinion I strongly advocate to the importance for school, and in this essay I will highlight both the scenarios with my views.
Firstly, If we consider the first group of people who thought house is the most suitable place for teaching a child they has few points like, house is the place where a child feels more comfortable, he or she can express his/her feelings,requirements or problems more easily compared to school. Moreover, house is more safer place compared to rest world for a child. For an instance, In New Delhi last year one high school student were murdered by his school senior, and police found that school management were not serious about the safety measures of the school, CCTV cameras were not working in the school. There type of issues gives bad impression to the image of the school, and because of these type of reasons parents strong feel that house is the best place for teaching a child.
On the other hand, There are many parents who believe that schools are the most effective place for teaching a child. As their prime motto is to educate the children in such a way so would become responsible citizens. Also, everyone can not afford private tutor, but school can hire a excellent teacher with handsome salary offer. Moreover, Children belonging to financialy poor families can also get the same level of education in the school. There are the points which made schools a much better choose for providing the education.
To conclude, As I have mentioned the advantages of both the views, Still there are many points need to consider before making a final decision. Even though, Giving education at house has some plus points, however as I mentioned schools consists lot many solid reasons, so value of the school is high with respect to teaching a child at the house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ry parents wants to give their children a best environment irrespective to their ...
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...express his/her feelings,requirements or problems more easily compared to school....
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...ford private tutor, but school can hire a excellent teacher with handsome salary ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.864 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54055951843 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.828413392 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.6 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315621455566 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108316735075 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468830910735 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192665366786 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419311197849 0.056905535591 74% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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