Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Volunteer work is known for giving a substantial amount of experiences if they know how to utilize them into their jobs. Moreover, not only does it benefits people themselves but their community as well. Therefore, it is believed that young folks should be required with life-experiences by volunteering in their recess. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement. There are several benefits regarding unpaid community work.
Firstly, teenagers will have a higher chance of getting a job. It is more favorable to have working experiences first-hand when you're in a job interview. According to some surveys, it is claimed that those has experienced with work are more likely to become employed.
Second, it helps using your strengths and improved your weaknesses. What meant by this is doing community work isn't always an easy task, which is why it helps youngsters to be a fast-thinker using their skills to deal with difficult tasks and improving their weaknesses.
In conclusion, it is not necessary for adolescents to be required doing unpaid community work. But in my perspective, it is recommended that college students should equip themselves with experiences before graduating to be more successful in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
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Message: Did you mean 'benefit'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: benefit
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Suggestion: you're
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to use' or 'use'.
Suggestion: to use; use
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29081632653 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03102020892 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7375230857 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338205629977 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117793779073 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934773108368 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178988575288 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744098815221 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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