There is an opinion that ordering youngsters to do voluntary works in their spare time without any payment would do wonders for both young volunteers and the society. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this viewpoint.
To commence with, the teenagers nowadays are already put under a lot of pressure from school work. An excessive amount of their time is spent on school assignments and homework which are huge demanding, thus, they just have a little hours left in a day for their daily routines and hobbies such as reading books, listening to music , doing the cookery and so on.Hence, forcing them to do something that they do not have a passion for would put more tension on their shoulders which lead to the poor mental health and worsen outcomes in academic performance.
Moreover, in lieu of taking delight in volunteering, making voluntary works obligatory would generate a sense of resentment to these works in young people. In contrast, if youngsters have freedom of choice to choose what they want to do when they are free, they will more likely to find that giving a helpful hand to the poor or disadvantaged children would be a worthily decent option on their to-do lists. As a result, teens would willingly accomplish voluntary works in a more comfortable state of emotion.
In conclusion, juveniles should not be under obliged to complete any voluntary tasks when they are free except for their actual desire to engage in these doings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uch as reading books, listening to music , doing the cookery and so on.Hence, forc...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
... to music , doing the cookery and so on.Hence, forcing them to do something that they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, thus, except for, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64755743163 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.717617628 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.75 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.875 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212128663051 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873916374312 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386990450725 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128089890806 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303346136968 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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