Some people believe they should keep all the money, they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
All the people earned money for fulfill our needs. In the current time of technological advancement, one of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic, should public keep all their earnings and should tax paying to the government,why? I completely disagree with this statement and I explore some various points on this questions.
At begin, According to the statement, If some proportion of our earnings and paying to the government. Then government provides many facilities to us. Which that we can recieved from government.
Example, If I paying the taxes, Government gave the pensions to the old age persons, Which is helpful in his future,and government also provide free treatment in the hospitals and skilled doctors are there for medical help if we pay the tax and best education provide in the schools, there are professional teachers teached the students. Government provide free transportation for travelling and good condition roads. And last but not least, taxes are also used for funding military services, which is important for maintaining the political stability of a nation. So the taxes are beneficial for the development of the people and my country.
In conclusion, we have been seen that there are number of answer to this questions. On balance, however, we tend to believe that paying taxes to the government.One very beneficial for development of the people and notion themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01074049457 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.6779542213 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217928689473 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075438971916 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072342550499 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135115393959 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950386938257 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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