Some people believe that a vertical city in which people work and live in tall buildings is a good idea. Others say that horizontal living is better. Discuss both views and express your opinion.
Undoubtedly, nowadays due to shortage of land and increase in population, skyscraper buildings are booming day by day in a city side, whereas in the countryside still many people prefer to live in a horizontal house. While, personally, in my point of view both have its own merits and demerits, which I will enunciate below.
To begin with, there are no doubt builders who construct the buildings buy a small land and to earn large profits, they construct the tall buildings at one go. In many countries, these kinds of buildings are eminent and used for office and living purpose because of shortage of land. For instance, I am staying in Hong Kong on the 29th floor and complete building has 35 floors. Moreover, nowadays people hold the opinion that all those people who stay on the higher floors are safe from noise pollution and air pollution compared to those who lives on the lower floors of the building. However, tall buildings have its own disadvantages such as in case of lifts predicament, it is really strenuous for everyone to use the staircase. Moreover, in case of fire, for example, it would be difficult and unsafe for fire exits.
On the other hand, some people prefer to live in horizontal buildings which have its own advantages. Firstly, there is no need to spend extra amount on lifts and escalators. Moreover, due to this there is saving on electricity bills, which in turn save energy. Secondly, the small house is safe in case of risks which are caused by natural calamities such as earthquake. Finally, a ventilation system is much better in the small buildings compared to high buildings.
To recapitulate, there is no doubt that tall building is equally important like small building due to scarcity of land. Nevertheless, both have its own pros and cons and it totally depends upon the place where buildings are constructed.
Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.134831460674 0.155533422707 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10393258427 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0449438202247 0.0501214627716 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0308988764045 0.0437548338989 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134831460674 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0196629213483 0.0403226058552 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.72395238721 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0337078651685 0.0326793684256 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0758426966292 0.0861772015684 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00561797752809 0.021408717616 26% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0224719101124 0.011925033212 188% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1860.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86750788644 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315457413249 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239747634069 0.28420135186 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198738170347 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13880126183 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72395238721 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 57.5943393584 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1333333333 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1434347402 49.517814964 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.814263465372 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 45.1080967403 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.92 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297173659124 0.332605444948 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0904259141376 0.102741220458 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0570628489145 0.0668466124924 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517491999635 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0997556549615 0.148594505496 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121751014866 0.134430193775 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429669440845 0.0742795772207 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.329689760659 0.324371583561 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0402601978693 0.0638462369009 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214967201468 0.228012699653 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353304673759 0.058150111329 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.