Technology is probably one of the greatest inventions of the century. And as the technology growing day by day television industry also growing and new channels added in our favorite list. Some people believe that watching television is good and enjoyable while others disagree with this notion and opine that it just a waste of time. In my opinion, the merits of watching television outweigh the demerits but before drawing a quick conclusion it needs to be discussed.
To commence with one of the utmost advantages of television is the main source knowledge all over the world either it related to science, politics, media or sports. Secondly, it also engages the family in a single bond while watching any serial or movie. Thirdly, it also a good pass time to the audience of all ages and mostly for adolescents.
On the other hand, it also bad if people addicted to it and watch television all the time without doing other important work. Especially for children they can not able to focus on their study and it also increases the problem of obesity. Some people also think that television encouraging a teenager to do violence as they see. And also teenager influenced by modern lifestyle, they try to do what they saw.
To recapitulate, by looking at the above facts, definitely, there is some negative side of watching television. However, in my viewpoint, it also an excellent spare time to every age audiences and very helpful for gaining knowledge about any field. It also connects us to all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66752389662 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7323956077 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152706869057 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542321839726 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708374077741 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893213057052 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383936026867 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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