Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police or military force such as the army. While others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays gender disparities are disappearing due to these females are eligible to do every types of jobs. However, a section of society deems that women should do services of police as well as armies as like me because they are well-educated and provide similar efforts likes men for their societies. Whilst, others neglect this notion and said that these jobs are not better for ladies as they are physically weak and very emotional.
The one school of thought believes that it is mandatory for the development of regions that feminine should work in police, military forces as well. Moreover, the main factor is that today’s women are well-educated rather than past so they wisely handle the situations. In addition to this, they can not only give the idea to solve the obstacles but also solve these hurdles within seconds due to their sharp mental abilities. Even though,in today’s era women offer equally efforts to communities as compare to men. For example, a famous IPS officer kieran Bedi, she do lots of efforts,works and in courage for the betterment of the society.
The another school of thought thinks that these jobs are not suitable for females because they are not physically strong rather than males. Furthermore, the jobs of military and police required a vast amount of physical work. On the other hand, women are not eligible to offer huge proportion of physical strength to these kinds of jobs. In contrast, females are very emotional so they easily feel afraid to see the blood in the fight grounds. For instance, Sandhya Rathi army officer felt emotional weak when her family escaped by a group of terrorist. Apart from this, she lost her all thinking ability and released perilous criminal which caught by her to free her family from the trap of terrorist.
In my perception, there are not any sex difference can be seen among males and females in the present world so that is why women are able to do that kinds of jobs. Moving further, nowadays a majority of females are physically strong because they are doing regular exercise and Join gym for weightlifting. For example, IPS officer Reena single had faced alone group of 8 gangsters and fight with them. On the other words, she never given up and arrested those groups, sent them prison as well.
In conclusion, although differences of genders are reducing sharply from world but there are majority of males who thinks that females are not able to work in armies and police as they are physically weak. Beside that, a huge number of females negligible their thinking and working in armies and police forces on big positions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93468468468 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54361655677 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515765765766 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1440507715 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.55 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209944078361 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647651472692 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452806721484 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117778627884 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390498920865 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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