In today’s medical sphere, the problem of testing medical supplies and techniques on living beings has become one of the most pressing problem in tht field. In this essay, I will discuss why there is a need for laboratory testing on animals in the initial stages of technical development in lieu of people while there is an opposing view, especially from people who are engaged with organizations like Greenpeace.
On one hand, it might seem that testing on defenseless creatures is a very cruel and totally immoral activity. Moreover, it is unquestionably true that nobody can deprive or jeopardize someone’s life without flippantly, whether it is a human or another being. A recent study found that, manually, hundreds of millions of animals are used in science for different types of vivisection, let alone the fact that most of these experiments result in injuries or even the peril of the animal in question.
On the other hand, pharmacists acknowledge that this appalling measure is worth the millions of human lives that it saves, which doctors would not have managed to save if testing of varioua medicines were not first done on animals. For instance, the human genome is similar to the chimpanzee; we share 98% of DNA. This fact gives scientists a chance to test many treatments first on such animals without being afraid that the effects on people will be different and potentially harmful.
Taking everything into account, I hope that in the future scientists will discover the methods to test all medical treatments without having to use flora and fauna, and consequently, the life of no one creature will be vulnerable to risks or any hazard.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02888086643 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83224443124 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606498194946 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3590082468 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.777777778 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187148453663 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683127292717 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282980058901 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104112289562 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323334142322 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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