Some people that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of the sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although, it is sometimes said that building more sport facilities is the most effective method to improve and develop public health, others though that more measures are needed to give more impact on public health. In my opinion, I consider that huge amount of sport facilities in the area helps a lot to develop public health.
On the one hand, some people say that the number of the activity institutions help people to get motivated and starting to care about their health issues and I agree. In other words, looking at some people, who is doing some activities, turns point for others and gives signal to start new activities and sports. For example, people generally begin to think about sports when people around them have already became active, so they also want to do it like others. Furthermore, caring about their health is vital in order to release stress, which is most common issues, they need to try doing sports or activities.
On the other hands, it is often believed that there need other requirements to improve health in better ways. As living in stressful situation, only doing some exercise will not help to stay healthy, so people need to care about their diet. For example, people need to decrease income of the saturated fat, which can cause cardiovascular problems, and try to eat more vegetable to take some essential vitamins. Moreover, changing their lifestyle in to new healthy style can improve mental and physical health in both ways
To sum up, people may vary in their opinions, I think that people can be more healthy than before If there are lots of facilities to do physical activities and sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, for example, i think, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87142857143 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43909484717 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1976625461 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.4 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287459412831 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116181816054 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635402106051 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163738316965 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838278643743 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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