Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.
It is sometimes thought that learning new language at elementary school is more beneficial for children than learning at high school. In this situation, I believe that the drawbacks are outweighed by the advantages.
The disadvantage of this aspect is that it is possible for children to start forgetting their native language or mix it with other language. In other words, if children start using foreign language in their daily life, it can affect the native language in some way, like misspelling, mispronunciation or misuse of the word.
Despite this negative aspect, there are significant benefits it can bring to students. Firstly, start studying foreign language at primary school makes it easier for children. In other words, a brain function of the young child is developing at this stage ,which means their brain can receive any of the new information without difficulties, therefore it allows children to learn comfortably.
In addition, it is advantageous for students in later life, when as an adult. Learning new language early opens door to become multilingual, which is most useful skills in any field. Child, for example, who is half American and half Japanese has more talent to speak five or more languages rather than who start studying foreign language at high school.
I, however, argue that there are some disadvantages of the foreign language courses at primary school, the advantages outweigh this drawbacks. It gives opportunity to children to develop their language skills early and simply.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2962962963 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84951418154 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551440329218 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2226060843 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429501138566 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165111912798 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117337721871 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267016280147 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926992485066 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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