Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Essay topics:

Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Some languages erased in some countries every year. Although, it is thought that decreasing number of native languages is not serious issue and it would be more simple for people in the world. I totally disagree with this opinion because every single language, even it has a little amount of users, contain and represents their own culture and it has unique characteristics.

The main reason why I believe diminishing number of the language is a serious issue is because culture of the nationality is represented by their language and the usage of language. In other words, native languages can not be erased and if they die out, culture, which is most important part of the existence of nationality, will disappear with them too. For example, the people, who lost their native language, have to start using non-native language and this causes major culture differences. Furthermore, culture differences will effect people's communication and it will become harder to interact with each other and express themselves.

In addition, lost of the language initiates subordination, which means the nationality controlled by other nationalities. This has an atrocious impact on economy, politics, education and development of the nation. Nation can not make some decisions independently and always contain some involvement of dominant country. As a result of the subordination, existence and in dependency of the country will be in danger in the future.

In conclusion, I totally agree that loss of the language is an obvious major of the nation. Even though, number of the language will decrease if languages die out, this will not ease the life. Beside, this can affect the independence of the nationality and their unique culture.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26714801444 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00067546167 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516245487365 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6389941092 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36429406239 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12414451104 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773721999504 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23174453869 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743953064303 0.056905535591 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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