Some people claim that the media has a negative influence on contemporary society. They think that htere is very little tolerance for new ideas because of its impact. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
The dawn of 21st century have seen the development of social media, and in general it have much effect on society. Some people say that those effects are positive. However, I strongly agree that the influences of media on life around us are negative. This essay wil expalin more about the idea.
To begin with, almost things mentioned on social network or newspaper nowadays are bad news. That's because bad news will atract more people than good ones, so that journalist (or content creator on social media) can earn more money. In consequence, negative news would be poular in contemporary society, and it's not hard to acesss to the news, and the community will have bad perpective. For instances, during the time Vietnam was social distancing due to Covid-19, social medias used to update information about the cases of coronavirus, the deaths because of the pandemic, which made inhabitants felt extrememly worried, some people even blamed the authorities for not having responsible for the pandemic. Nevertheless, governments have successfully controlled the cases and deaths from Covid-19, so it was embarrassed for people having done this.
On top of that, almost youngsters have to deal with bad things in newspaper in young age, and when time is going it will have a bad effect on their mind. Because adolescenes don't have much experiences like the previous generations, so having read the bad news may make them feel much pessimistc, hence they will not have an accurate outlook on life. In consequence, their mindset will be influenced. Here's an example, There are numerous suicides are students in Vietnam, and when news about them is showed on TV/socail network/newspaper/....,, children will find school not an appropriate place for them, they are usually absent from class, just stay at home, paying games all day. Or on some other occassions, children even warn their parent they can suicide whenever they don't feel good about their moms/dads
To sum up, it is tolerance for media to show bad news to other people, because those bad news have chunks of negative affects. With all above explanations, I wholeheartedly believe that we should control the content of news in any sources, to make sure that no one will be impacted bay bad things
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, for instance, in general, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81377437301 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9955012316 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142648294484 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522634199039 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417907091126 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096940549883 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295643355927 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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